Original design above.
My input below.
When is the ASCTA conference?
I need to get there to speak at the event next year.
I’d love to get there this year and stay with you guys and have some time together. But, at the event, it is hard to conduct 1-to-1 business too.
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As to the advertisement. It is good.
A few tips:
You have:
Find us at Booth 26.
Could be:
Visit booth 26 at 2018’s ASCTA Conference.
You have:
or enquire @ www.autocoach.com.au
Could be:
email, Sales@www.autocoach.com.au
(The @ sign makes it look like an email.)
Headline: You have:
Digital.
Humm… But even a $10 stop watch is digital these days.
You have:
Finally, a stopwatch build for the 21st Century….
Humm. … Wasn’t that 18 years ago?
Could be:
Get a stopwatch built for cutting-edge coaching interactions amid tech-aware athletes.
or Could be:
Use a stopwatch built for cutting-edge coaching interactions amid tech-aware athletes.
or Could be:
Hold the most powerful, wirelessly-networked, audio-enabled, programmable swim management device that extends your voice, whistle, scoreboards, pace-clocks and mathematical brilliance.
